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CommentAuthorPinnacle
- CommentTimeMay 28th 2008 edited
Hey, I have a new song called listen. i would appreciate it if you listened to it and told me what you think. i just want to know if my flow is getting better and whether or not im going in the right direction. O, and its just a snippet of the song, first verse
http://www.fileden.com/files/2007/9/12/1428615/NEWLISTENREAL.mp3
www.myspace.com/thetruepinnacle
thanks
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CommentAuthorsix omega
- CommentTimeMay 28th 2008
I like your layed back style and the fact that you keep some substance in your music. The only criticism I can give you is to try and have more fun with it. You sound kinda inhibited, I'd like to hear you let go and put alot of emotion into your vocals. I think you sound good now but you have the potential to sound great. Loosen up, make love to the mic....put some soul into that shit. I mean look at James Brown, that fool was loved because he was uninhibited and wild....who the fuck else uses "WAAAAAOOOOOHHH!!!!" as an actual lyric? People love it though...why because he's loose and enjoying himself. Aside from that it sounds awesome. Much love.
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- CommentAuthorCan-U
- CommentTimeMay 28th 2008
definitely getting better, the computer mic aint helpin things though
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CommentAuthorcuntmusk
- CommentTimeMay 29th 2008
the computer mic wouldnt be too bad if you had some sort of noise gate i think. when the track fades out you kinda hear the crackle go away, so i dunno. otherwise that's some good lyrics/flowin but yea six is right needs a little punch of sorts. maybe an undertrack or something for emphasis, but good stuff bro.
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CommentAuthorPinnacle
- CommentTimeMay 29th 2008
Thank You, All the comments are appreciated. more critiques would also be welcome.
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- CommentAuthoreriksoderquist
- CommentTimeMay 29th 2008
you need to make love to the beat. it sounds like ur rapping the words with no regards to the beat. Like you would rap the words the same no matter what type of beat its on. The words your using are not too bad. and your voice sounds straight. needs more energy behind it though. but learn to bounce your words off the beat. The beat should control your flow pattern.
Oh and the ever so slightest filer on your vocal track will kill that hiss with out fuking up ur voice. One real bad thing i noticed is the hiss comes in like after the first few bars, like all of a sudden some one turned the mic on. but a real simple filter will kill that. but dont over filter or you will start to effect your voice.
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CommentAuthorPinnacle
- CommentTimeMay 30th 2008
i get what your saying. i feel like that about all my tracks. ill just have to record and put more emotion into it.
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CommentAuthorPinnacle
- CommentTimeMay 31st 2008
Anybody Else In The Mood To Critique?
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CommentAuthorUnderstatement
- CommentTimeJun 4th 2008
id probably agree with all the comments. \
eriksoderquist:
you need to make love to the beat.
not because its bad advice, but because agree is the homie and i dig his passion about this music... my two cents is just to try to show a little more energy/expression, ive always been into the gabe teodros style shit, but if you listen to gabe he still uses a fair amount of vocal inflexions to make what he is saying sink in more and make one statement sound different than the one before it. your also off to a solid start on the production to if that is you.
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