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Hadn't heard much of you before this, good stuff though, really lookin forward to the project.

syndicate:

Make it happen lil homie.... sounds good, do ya thang...........

SQ
Syndicate Music............

thanks man you always have positive things to say. diggin the vibe.

jgreene:

Hadn't heard much of you before this, good stuff though, really lookin forward to the project.

thanks, really appreciate it. the album is coming together nicely i hope i dont dissapoint anyone

REIGN:

sounds fresh homie! you should hit up swift he gots beats that will fit your steeze...

thanks my man and ive been trying to work with swift foooooooooooooooooorrrrrrrrrrrrrrreeeeeeeeeeeeeeevvvvvvvvvvveeeeeeeeeeeerrrrrrrrrrrrr. lol

wow, your getting ALOT better man. keep working on the cadence. but i like where its going

you talk about frustration a lot but you sound emotionally autotuned. it's hard for me to believe that you care more about the topic than the track itself. i think denzel washington probably acts with the hope of feeding himself and his family, but he still manages to convince me that he's a dude in a wheelchair trying to bust the bone collector. even rick ross affects that drug money triumph naturally enough for me to suspend my disbelief. you sound like a rapper reading raps that he wrote to make rap songs so people could listen to him rap. not my earl gray but it sounds like it could make a "best of fresh blends" mixtape and it definitely sounds like that's your angle.

Good work. Everything sounds good. I agree with DFKS. All ya got to do is go in a little more. A little more emotion in the flow and it's a wrap.

i listened to it.

singin was cool.the beat needs some break downs...

practice emotion on a track..you sound ansy and more hyped up then depressed on the track..so it's not believable.

listen to other rappers and how they sound on tracks like that to get an idea of what im talkin about.

for example on marvwons myspace page he gotta song with pain...and then he has a song where it's all humor.

dont try to be extra hype just use a deeper voice but more layed back...imo

try to write to the song instead of already having writtens for the song will help if u havent...

remember it's the way you say it thats the problem..so if i was cussin' up a storm in the style u just rapped i would get taken as a joke..

keep up the good work tho fam..

peace

it sounds like the type of music that would be lauded at fresh blends. i don't like that music, generally, but i like a few of your songs and everything i've heard from bruce leroy. i just wouldn't actively seek any of that stuff out. don't misread and misjudge. i try to say stuff pretty explicitly.

A fresh blends mixtape would be fuckin dope considering itd consist of blu, othello, fice, can-u, crown, bruce leroy, & xp to name a few... That's just from shows I remember... But clown fresh blends all u want...that mixtape is easily better than any mixtape out right now...

Oh yeah.... My bad.... Yeah fb did have some wack artists and alot of repeats....but it had a decent amount of dope artists.

I'm just saying I'd rather listen to a fb mixtape (with the dope artists that have been to fb...not all artists) than a fabolous or lil wayne mixtape

Way better then some of your previous stuff. I will say you still got that typical white boy trying to rap flow pattern, but its getting better. It almost dissapears in a few spots. I will say its the best thing I've hurd from you so far. The beat sounds ok. Work on your patterns homie. Practice matching other patterns. You should be able to switch up to different patterns on the drop of a dime and mimic tons of different emcees. There is tons of progression on this track but I'm not gonna lie to you and tell you its a hit. But keep keep on.

nyknick821:

I'm just saying I'd rather listen to a fb mixtape (with the dope artists that have been to fb...not all artists) than a fabolous or lil wayne mixtape

A FRESHBLENDS MIXTAPE WOULD FAIL JUS LIKE THE SHOW. AND WHY DID IT FAIL IN THE FIRST PLACE...IT WAS WACK!

Sound Shop - FB was Local artists. Jay Barz, Logics, Island Trybe, Second Fam and moer. So your saying that those artists are wack? As i remember the last show was packed. Why dont you shut up already about the fresh blends and try to do something worth talking about.

TheSoundShopNW:

The last show....LAST! Hey, tell your cuzin I said what up!

which one?

Its sounds like an old 311 song

I cant see myself bumpin ur songs in my car...Still not my cup...But there is a fanbase for ur type of music,so keep grinding and stay true homie!!!

Pinnacle needs help...OR tell your boys..crew and people..FRANK QUALITY thinks your WHACK.. Sleepless nights was horrible another white boy sounding like an ACCOUNTANT keep ya day job...and leave HIPHOP alone

but if you know of a good day job let me know, not many ppl are trying to hire a kid with no real work experience :(

pinnacle. keep doing what ya do.. tracks good, and I didn't see no asher roth in the track. Though Tacoma does have their own asher roth I've heard.. haha

Freshmen! Freshmen! Freshmen! Freshmen! Do sumthin crazy! Do sumthin crazy! Do sumthin crazy!

...I only really liked that track cuz it reminded me of my college days.

So yea...who is Tacoma's Asher Roth?!